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Exquisite Corpse

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RipplePopPop
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Exquisite Corpse by RipplePopPop » #1

let's play a writing game!!!! let's write something together!

for exquisite corpse, there's a bunch of ways to play but this thread is for playing it this way:

A: writes a sentence
B: writes a sentence based on A
C: writes a sentence based on B

where we spoiler the sentences to keep it so you only look at the person's right before you!

don't add a sentence twice in a row and after after 5ish sentences feel free to say that corpse is finished if you wanna start a new one!

i'll start

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a strange sound woke up the little fish.

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Re: Exquisite Corpse by SecretGarden » #2

Sounds like fun! I'll join in!

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The little fish looked around for the source of the sound, but it was nowhere to be found.

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Re: Exquisite Corpse by BEEGFEESH » #3
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The fish got up to see if it left the TV on in the next room.

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Re: Exquisite Corpse by LadyOfTheLake » #4

oh that sounds fun lets see if i do this right

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the television wasnt on but something outside the window caught the fishs attention

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DewDrop
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by DewDrop » #5
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the fish was shocked to see it was matilda
the best cryptid of them all

-DD

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NeverScared
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by NeverScared » #6
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The fish went outside... to get a closer look...
But...
Matilda was gone...

Not quite sure how this works...
Can I call a story completed...?

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Re: Exquisite Corpse by RipplePopPop » #7

either way works!!! whoever wants to start the next one can go ahead

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DewDrop
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by DewDrop » #8

oh i can start the next one

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a sleepy spider crawled across its web while dew shone like jewels in the early morning light

-DD

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NeverScared
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by NeverScared » #9
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The spider grumbled as it stepped... into another patch of dew...

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Re: Exquisite Corpse by SecretGarden » #10
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Deciding to clear away all the water, the spider fetches itself a little broom.

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LadyOfTheLake
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by LadyOfTheLake » #11
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the spider swept away all the dew while fighting back a yawn

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MissingKoi.
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by MissingKoi. » #12
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With the dew swept into a neat pile, she steps back to check her work.

Missing does not mean gone for good...

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StillWaters
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Re: Exquisite Corpse by StillWaters » #13
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And, satisfied, she decides to call it a day.

I hope I haven’t closed out the story too early!

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Re: Exquisite Corpse by RipplePopPop » #14

good job everyone!! just remember to only read the very last sentence until someone says that the story is over!!

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